Wednesday, July 15, 2009

I Remember Omens (edit)

...


when I
was just a little boy

the girls
across the street

would let
me burn them

if I cried


such compassion
such intimacy

(like funeral sex in a bed for one)


our sins now akin to shadows...
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  1. Jordan KrallJuly 25, 2009 at 11:33 AM

    I like it though I think the last line should just be "if I cried"... I think if you end there, it's stronger.

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