Wednesday, July 15, 2009

I Remember Omens (edit)


when I
was just a little boy

the girls
across the street

would let
me burn them

if I cried

such compassion
such intimacy

(like funeral sex in a bed for one)

our sins now akin to shadows...

1 comment:

  1. I like it though I think the last line should just be "if I cried"... I think if you end there, it's stronger.